tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5996150568062682613.post512850973775956335..comments2024-03-28T00:21:29.975-07:00Comments on WTF's - Writing Thrilling Fiction...: Opening Chapter . . .DRChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03352970077497112668noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5996150568062682613.post-60448497103737850092011-05-12T11:06:19.178-07:002011-05-12T11:06:19.178-07:00Better late than never! I loved it, I was there in...Better late than never! I loved it, I was there in the storm and the pic at the end was just as it was in my head! <br />I hope non-writer people can leave comments! <br />Amy<br />xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5996150568062682613.post-4211132635422885822011-01-19T06:38:19.619-08:002011-01-19T06:38:19.619-08:00Do people more anal than you really exist?...lol
...Do people more anal than you really exist?...lol<br /><br />I did consider that, but struggling to keep hold of the wheel was the easiest roll to write about, and having a rope holding it in place took the excitement away. I don't know, maybe the the pressure on the wheel was too much and it broke the rope away from where it was attached, meaning they had to steady her by hand. I might add that just to please the anal out there...lol<br /><br />Thanks<br /><br />And WB...I'm so glad you enjoyed it...DRChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03352970077497112668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5996150568062682613.post-55947832936417427002011-01-18T04:07:16.564-08:002011-01-18T04:07:16.564-08:00That's a great opening to a book. Tense and a...That's a great opening to a book. Tense and action packed.<br /><br />One technical thing. As far as I know all sailing ships had a rope that would keep the wheel in place at certain times. I don't know how much research you've done on that, but it might be an idea to check it out. Just in case someone more anal than me (they do exist) reads it.Martin Willoughbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05605554706836638988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5996150568062682613.post-68051329493922642532011-01-17T06:59:12.055-08:002011-01-17T06:59:12.055-08:00This sounds like a thrilling piece of literature! ...This sounds like a thrilling piece of literature! I enjoyed this chapter very much, and the images were captivating and went along with the story nicely.<br /><br />I hope to read more soon!W.B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05841802857427762014noreply@blogger.com